Just plain Plain.

New at this? How OLD are you guy? Your spelling is very very bad. Good idea i guess so i'll give you a point for that. The story makes a little bit of sense. With a flash that choppy and plain I'm guessing you're not using a real flash program. It looks like paint or something. If you're really interested in doing something real i'm sure I could provide a link to Flash 8 or something. Those dingbats that gave you anything over a 3 are Nuckin FUTS!

alright

grammar reminds me of AYB

Ehh...

If I recall, you completely changed from the end of the last episode. Didn't they go into space to a different world? What happened to that, this seems totally different altogether.

Anyway, the flash itself desperately needs improvements and you really need to fix your spelling and grammer.

Dubya-tea-eff?

You ended your flash in the middle of a battle. Not before, not after, not during a cliffhanger, but DURING a fight?

Fix your spelling and put some more effort into it for Christ's sake. Sorry to be harsh, but that's the way I see it.

very nicely done

It's not so much an issue w/ grammar as it is WITH SPELLING. Also, the animation was a bit on the slow side. But you still get 5/5 and 10/10 for making a great series. I look forward to seeing more.