For this being your first animation, the actual animation is smooth, it is pretty great. Would have been better if the whole screen was not shown in the video. You know, cropping, if you had the tool. The humor itself and personalities given to the two characters were pretty bad. I am not going to bag on it too much though, because this being uploaded at 2009, I would have actually maybe gotten a little chuckle out of something from this (most likely the "It's a tunic!" part). So since I am 4 years late, I won't judge too much as if it was made a few months ago.