Good idea but...Work on some things...
Don't release the full thing at this quality. You will fail if you do.
I liked the idea of it but I'll give you a few tips for when you realease the full movie.
Work on the scenes and lighting - Shade your backgrounds, it gives them depth and detail. Maybe add some foreground and effects.
Animate - Don't just use static images and text. Make your characters move, Take a look at some of the other popular stick animations on the portal. If you don't want to animate them walking you could shoot all the walking shots as close ups, and jump them up and down. Scrolling the background. This way it still looks like they're walking.
Text - Perhaps use different fonts for each colour, and use textboxes rather than just having it randomly floating. You can design the text boxes to look cool.
If your making an action movie, you might want camera effects. These can easily be achieved by making your movie scene slightly larger than the canvas on flash, and then when a shot is fired. Jolt the whole scene around.
Use overlay's to lighten or darken the mood. If its a dark alley use a black overlay(Alpha it to about 30%).
Just think about it realisticly. Animations that are realistic in the sense of direction are the ones that succeed the most. Put effort into it and you'll do alot better.
Looking forward to the final project.
Neon.