It's hard to say anything about this. I was pretty intrigued as to what this was all about. It should have been put under the "Experimental" category. I didn't like it how you had just plain text on a background sometimes. It seemed more like it was an early Clock Crew submission. I think the good outweighed the bad.
Of course, a three out of five star rating still isn't one I would recommend. Most of the animation wasn't that good. I do have to give you credit for at least having some creativity. It worked pretty well as an experiment. Granted, I don't know much about your other works, so I can't compare.