Needs more

More Basspro55

lawl

good shit! obviously you already know of what improvements you need to commit to on the design and art side. As far as your ideas go, I like'm. maybe make each story last a bit longer.. more twists ya know? catch some rythum?

Wowza.

I will admit. I lol'd hard.

Nice ending

It started off pretty dull, not a lot going on, but I admit that ending was really cool and unexpected.