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i agree with plasticmanicor. music wasnt bad. the animation was awful. the motion was bad. most of all you need a back round! im trying to be constructive here: it doesnt even have to be a detailed background, just make one! its much better then white! to be honest the bg doesnt even have to be an actual place. hell, you can just use a bunch of colors that look good! as i sed, its better then white. all of us fellow animators know that a white bg means you put absoutely 0 effort into it. so atleast make us think you tried with the bg.
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