Wow, it's been a while since I touched Flash!
This was made for a short animation project in school (Advertising art major) Jess the griffin is a mad scientist looking to actually create a chimera. She was hoping for something ferocious, something to become a guardian beast or a machine of war. But it seems that some of her girlish charm may have been thrown into the mixture...
Music in the first part is from the 1993 version of Frankenstein, composed by Patrick Doyle. (Which I recorded from my television) All sound effects from various free services. All speech was done by me.
I'm looking to clean this up a bit more as time passes (Fix some sound bits, get my own original music for the opening etc)
By the way guys, thank you so much for the comments! I'm going to be working on it some more over the summer to make it even better, now that I have the time to do so.
Great character design!
As short as this is, this is really good. Love the design of the griffin scientist, really unique. Sound quality could be a bit better. Maybe with a bit of cleanup like you said and maybe a minute of more content (and a few new characters), this could be the start of something really great for you. Hope to see more because I like your art style.
You can improve
this was very decent and well worked on. the animation was very good but you need to work on sound and and on those long pauses.
keep trying) -Goldentank50
Awesome animation
The animation and artwork is awesome! No complaints there! But the voice over is not that good. You have a nice voice, but you seem to be afraid talking normal into the microphone. Maybe you could get a friend or someone on Newgrounds to help you out.
But, awesome animation, great work!
Not bad
Nice art, but as previously stated, not great sound/voice. Also, I think it could do without the long pauses between events.
Overall: Pretty, but severed
Pros:
- Drawing Skills
- Facial Expressions were appropriate
- Incorporation of music and sound effects
Cons
- Voice acting could have been better
- Somewhat Cliché
- Contextually and logically lacking (Back-story should have been in the presentation. Why would she destroy something that she not only worked hard on but was also benign ?)