What a simple time we live in!

The Phisermans review. So blunt, and doesnt really offer anything helpful. Chris, I dont think i'm in any case able to criticse your comics, so I dont think someone can moan about your flashs content, especially as it's your first flash animation, which is always impressive. (You can get some horribly rank voice animations, or stickmen or something other than turd.) I'd offer, like deathwiller said some great elevator music, perhaps a collab rather than a short and even a reply, or rewind section like some flashes. Always helpful that.

Personally chris, I hope to see you on the frontpage sometime, good luck with the animation man. Next egoraptor you grizzly BEAST. Take it easy lemon squeezy.

awesome!

Funny, good voices, and great animation for your first try. Nice job!

My spidey sense is tingling....

I smell potential.... Dont get sad if this one kind of fails, because it was short, and felt a little bit empty. I liked the style and concept of the presentation.
I think you should keep making these cartoons, however.... Read my advice:
*Find fitting background music for the entire animation ( I think instrumental, neat music would do)
*Dont make single shorts, If you like making shorts, Make a lot of them and compile them in a movie.
*A little lowder, and if the background stays the same (for all your movies) color it ( I mean the TV) and add details.

Overall: It was nice, cute, but this was too short. Put more effort.
Good luck~! Dont give up!

Best flash ever .

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOL. XD omg this rox hella hard hehe. :D

Short,Sweet, and to the Point

Decent voice work and epicly drawn sandwich haha. Loved that it was short and still funny. Keep it up mane