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The Berserk Gamer

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My original Character lands a Job at a gaming store, he likes the job until a certain Costumer comes his way.

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boring

boooring. you need more snappy animation, even if the art stays the same. Also work on your voice acting so it doesn't sound like the characters are talking in their sleep.

uhm...

im sorry but the whole thing was an abomination hjust the lines and the way they spoke was just terrible you could improve by acting like your character instead of talking normally ok job on the art

Heart?

It sounded like you were to embarrassed to get into character, lines seemed forced and make the whole thing monotonic throughout.

Also, the second human character just looks like the "Original" character with a different colored shirt.

I don't know why

This made me laugh, it was a lot better than I thought it would be.

almost funny

your characters are likable, but the dialogue lacked wit, which is essential if you want to make people laugh.

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3,601
Votes
6
Score
2.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 29, 2009
2:27 AM EDT