Ummm

Two things. One, It was drawn prety well ( details and suck) but looked strange. Two, he's dead. Let it go.

hey man

It was okay, it wasn't that interesting. Try more camera angles and have Michael dancing. Furthermore, try adding shadow and highlight to your character's skin and clothes. Along with a homemade curtain, you should really give credit to where you found that curtain image.

Needs work.

More face movement, and actually, more accurate lip movement is needed. It looked like the same 3 frames of his mouth were appearing.