Shinyerestatasticmated...
Give it more color and Sheen,to Dreary..
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i mainly did this so i would have a neat flash intro at the beginning of my flashes, but this is also my first submission for the 100 theme challenge on deviantart so yeah
idk if it really works with the music but meh :\
it also includes a button that will send you to my website, its still a wip though, the button is the words when theyre all out there
Too long.
Biggest problem is it's too long, cut it a few seconds longer. Second biggest problem is the text is illegible. The sound effects or music or whatever it a good choice, and overall it looks good - don't know how memorable it would be, though.
Also, this makes me think Newgrounds needs a "Clips/Experiments" genre for people to classify their submissions under.
dyyor responds:
i had a feeling it was too long, wasnt sure though
i thought the text was readable but i guess not everybody can read kingdom hearts text XD
Bland
It needs more colour to it, I mean hell, the text is grey blue and the background is grey... Look up some colour charts to find some good apposing colours.
Seems a bit too long
Make the letter come in a bit faster and it would look a lot better.