Pretty Decent
As it stands towards being a first time, I actually like it. The drawing and effects are halfway decent and with experience I do believe you'll get a pretty good knack for it.
Sorry about the watermark. I only used a thirty day trial so the watermark was required in the animation :(
yeeeeah. Oh yeah theres no sound cuz i'm retarded and didn't make any. so yeah.
Pretty Decent
As it stands towards being a first time, I actually like it. The drawing and effects are halfway decent and with experience I do believe you'll get a pretty good knack for it.
Random
I lol'd.
Pretty good for a first attempt at animating.
Nice work
Well, you said this was your first - and I'll be honest and say that is a pretty good "first", not to mention a decent sampling. As an overall flash it's not that great b/c it's just a sample and there's no audio, however. Keep it up and you'll progress, since you seem to be a good artist. Looking forward to a complete piece.
If u ever need a composer, drop a line. I like your potential.
Nice try
Even though there was no sound I still lol'd
as a first try it was pretty decent
i tried making a flash and i failed but your first try was pretty good, i see potential