Too crappy
Its slow, chatty, and short,
you need more fresh blood! Thats what im trying to say.
OH! and better blood, i dont think blood is yellow, but on Hank (The killer) it has fresh red blood,
so next time, BETTER CHOICE OF VIDEOS!
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Author Comments
this is a very short scene out of my new flash cartoon
its almost done but i will only submit it if it is perfect so tell me what you are thinking of it
please comment
WRONG: this movie is cr*p and you shell burn in hell.......
GOOD: make animation smoother use more frames ,other music or characters, delete that scene, let there be jesus or clown...........
just stay contructive
good advice.
What you need is bigger, better blood,
fucking awesome.
MORE BLOOD@!
Nice!
Reminded me of the good old days when I saw madness for the first time. The text goes away pretty quick and the video loops at the end when the protragonist stabs the guy and the replay button shows good. Good job overall and keep up the good work.
cantstophammertime responds:
thanks ill finish it
MOAR KLOWN!
yes, more clown and less text. The text messed with the flow too much for me. I however am a retard.
cantstophammertime responds:
i thought about less text yeah
Pretty Good
First, if you're going to do madness stuff instead of trying to start up an original series, try to submit on Madness Day. Second, try to tween or wutever instead of doing frame by frame animation. Third, there should either be more fighting and less conversation or vice versa. Fourth, keep using music that's as good as or even better than this song. It helps more than you might realize to have good audio, so don't break the habit.
cantstophammertime responds:
thanks for the helpful review
