Pretty mediocre

I liked how you put some music in as opposed to a lot of other stuff that does not bother at all. I am glad you got so many hits/views on Deviantart, even if that might not be much by high standards. You at least have some talent in making flash as this had its good points. I liked how some of the features contrasted with each other, like the background and you in the cartoon. As this is not a popular submission, I can understand why nobody would come. Just add in better designs next time.

weak but alright

it needs a bit more maybe acrually arm movement

was nice

I have always liked that kind of style animation... although it was not so good, but still for having flash only for a few weeks it was pretty good in my eyes.

Potential

This style has potential. Keep the draw-in style, I can see it going far in the future.

What this flash lacked was detail. If this flash had detail/notably better graphics, I'd have enjoyed it much more.

Also, consider drawing in different elements after others have been colored in, to tell a story.

its ok

you have some potiential to get better, so keep it up :)