Quite dramatic
Good use of music to keep the mood. Nice sprite work and animation. The only thing is the text in the credits is barely readable. You might change the font and lighten it up a bit. Good job
Author Comments
Hi guys, back again with the fresh installment of the first new episode of this cartoon i've been working on for a while.
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The movie in length says 299.5 Seconds Long. 5 Minutes
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This is made in 24 FPS. Frames in the cartoon is 7190
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Took 2 weeks to complete due to my time devoted to this, seeing as how i work and have school.
Made in Macromedia Flash MX 2004. Best one in my opinion.
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The idea conjured while i would take walks around my neighborhood and listen to thematic music and i would create scenarios and stories in my head. This one i put to the Digital Screen.
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Watch the first installment and vote fairly. Any tips or criticism towards what should be done to amp up the feeling of this cartoon would be greatly appreciated. Please be fair and not nasty about your comments or else they will be deleted. Thank you and this has been a Poizin Production ^_^
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[-Plot-] The story behind this cartoon is, A guy named Adam(Riku) has the ability to summon a blade to his hand, little does he know about his own unique power to become a Hero, yet he can't control it, this stage he turns into is called, The Tonic Stage. Gabriel(Sora) is looking for Adam after he has gone missing since Kelly(Namine) was by his house checking up on him. Where did Adam go? And who is this person named Xephyre?
very nice
that was very good looking for episode 2
damn right n***a
sorry, that's from metalgearawesome...anyways, very good, I love KH!!! And the music was very carefully selected. Um, only things I see that could use some inprovement are the walking cycles, the look like all your characters are malfunctioning robots lol, oh, and you should definitely put some more detail and attention into your dialog boxes, I promise you. Pretty dialog boxes can mean the difference between a blam and a save, also people will take the story, the characters, and you more seriously. Otherwise, good work! Look forward to more.
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sorry, that's from futurama (:
The Text
The dialogue was tricky to read. i had to keep my eyes moving up and down to see the changes in the dialogue, if i didnt, i would have missed what the previous guy was saying.