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The Brickwall Three

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Hey there, NG.


Sorry for no music. I fail with adding music and scenes.

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Good without music

Great animation. Even though they are just sticks, the characters are kind of funny. Good sound, too. Work on adding music, if only to see how it works out. You never know. Also, slow down the text- it gets a bit too quick to read. Good job

alcaknight responds:

Haha, thanks for the review! :D

Potential

I like these little stick figure movies, and the monster idea was cute, especially around Halloween time.

However, the voice explosion there in the middle was edgy when it should've been toned down some and smoother, and, sorry to say, but it needs music for it to be "way cooler, yo."

Otherwise, love the humor and stick peep moves. ;D

alcaknight responds:

Yeah, I tried to add music, but I couldn't find a way. It kept turning off when I switched scenes. :/ Thanks for the review!

It's alright.

.:Animation:.
The animation was rather smooth. No blockyness, kept a constant speed, 5/5.

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.:Art:.
The art isn't too great, then again, this is a stick. For a stick, there isn't always much to expect, just that there is some significant use of colors. This area was ok. However, there was no background. 2/5.

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.:Plot:.
The plot was good, kept me in through the whole thing, and put me in suspense. To see what happens next, I'm going to watch the next part(s). Wasn't too boring, wasn't too slow, wasn't too fast. 4/5.

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.:Audio:.
Here's where the criticism comes in. There's absolutely no sound in the beginning, but once they start to fight off a lot of people (pretty much when the giant comes), sound effects kick in. Kinda seems lazy. You were able to put in sounds, just not for the whole thing. However, when there was audio, it was pretty decent. 2/5.

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.:Overall:.
The animation and plot were great, the art needed some work, as well as the audio, especially.

alcaknight responds:

I had some real difficulty with sounds and whatnot. Thanks for the review, though! I appreciate it. :D

Credits & Info

Views
3,036
Votes
3
Score
2.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 26, 2009
11:19 PM EDT
Genre
Action