Different Approach
At first I was a bit turned off by the lack of color, animation, etc..but after I read the description and realized that this was an animation style I warmed up to the idea a bit. I'm not an animator so I just try to give advice based on what would make it more appealing to me personally. Adding a bit of length to the flash would be cool. For example maybe making a bunch of short flashes that all have a certain theme for the next edition or something like that. Whatever you want to do. Anyway, thanks for the flash.