Average...
It wasn't bad... for a first submission, but damn it man, anyone can get daily 5th these days. It was just a few tweens a one joke that might just get a chuckle. The tea-bag was predictable.
It was... meh... I've seen better.
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Author Comments
Hey Newgrounds!
I have never submitted anything to Newgrouds since I have signed up which was almost 2 years ago. I felt bad for not doing anything, so I decided to create something for Newgrounds.
This short film was actually made for one of my particular classes in College. I plan on making much more for Newgrounds.
Hopefully this entertains you for a good 20 - 30 seconds xD
Credits
Animations: Curtis
Story: ScottBob
Music: ShAdOxViRuS, CrazyCookie
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Flag Returned (n.d.). Retrieved November 29, 2009, from http://nikon.bungie.org/m isc/h2dialogue.html
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i cant even believe this
the flash was literaly 15 seconds of mario getting shot and tea-bagged... and THIS got daily 5th!! what did u spend 10 mins on this? it wasn't really that bad despite the fact that you tweened around two sprites. i just cant believe how stupid newgrounders are rating this a 3.36, and now those same people are going to flag this as useless.
good
This is good for your first flash. Here's my critique:
Good:
The joke, it earned a small giggle
The music and graphics are acceptable for this kind of flash.
Bad:
Timing, it was way too slow. Speed it up a bit so the viewer isn't waiting for something to happen
good job for your first flash
i agree with SCTE3 though i also suggest to avoid overused things like halo teabagging its sorta become a cliche anyways i think your flashes would be alot better if your would try to do something a little more original and less predictable it was good for your first flash on newgrounds and you could become more opoular cuase u have the talent to
yoshiblue1733 responds:
Hey there!
Thanks for review and yes I am well aware that this is very UNORIGINAL xD, mostly for a class of mine but a few classmates enjoyed it so I decided to post it up here for shits and giggles.
This will probably be the only time I say this on here until I post it up in the near future but I am actually working on something much much bigger then this. Certainly putting much more effort into it and ofcourse it is completely original xD. (No Mario, Halo, Sonic, etc). It does have quite the in-depth storyline to it aswell so hope Newgrounds likes it.
Anyhooooo thanks again for reviewing!
Cheers!
neat
i liked the credits
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Daily 5th Place December 1, 2009