Short cartoon done for a college class. It was either animation or long paper, so duh a cartoon is better. First NG submission although I've been crawling around the FlashPortal for years now. good to finally submit something :)
*12/19 Hey thanks for the great reviews everyone! sorry I haven't been very attentive cuz I've been doing finals for the past two weeks, but I'm really surprised at the average review score, thats great! thanks again!!
Didn't see that coming
This is a wonderful example of economical story telling, you've just drawn the things necessary to tell the story, nothing more. I love it! I hope you're going to continue making flash stuff in the future, because you've really got a knack for it! :D
Thanks a lot! I'll try to make some more but I hardly ever finish a project XP
Great Stuff!
The animation and the music go great together. Very cute and funny, reminds me of a good television short for kids. Although I know those songs, I kinda hoped in your credits you'd have the artist/band that does them. All in all great job!
Okay lets see...
I used Spring Song, Vivaldi Summer & Winter, Spanish Flea, and Beach Parade. Thanks for the review :)
Very Nice
Awesome music, really good choices. Thanks for your work.
and thank you for your review
HAHA
I have to say this ammused me, especially
A) The chickens pulling out the guns
B) The twist at the end I never saw coming.
Also the animation was pretty smooth and although not advanced good in a simple yet stylized way. For a first submission... hell for even if it weren't a first submission I'd be impressed.
You should keep making animations and maybe get into either some more advanced black and white like this or some color stuff. :)
Thanks :) tbh though, I'd never be patient enough to do more advanced fbf animation, it sooo time-consuming XP but I'll give it a shot sooner or later :)
Nice, good job.
Nice one, I liked it at the end, at first I thought the animation was bad and the story was nothing new, but as I watched it the animation seemed to be perfect for this and the end was something new and unexpected for me.
Good job =)
Thanks for being patient and glad you enjoyed it :)