nice bird
not bad. i feel that i got the general idea of the story, but it would seem as if the elements of the man's dream were placed because they were cool, first, and only loosely worked together to describe the old man's situation, which i think should have been the priority.
knit-picking: the pigeon that looks up at the beginning of the animation appears to be at a very strange angle. i don't know if this was desired?