What is up with the nose?
This was ok. It was a bit clever, but the voice of Odysseus was a strange combination of whine and over-embellishment of every word. I know this is a satire, but if that's what an epic hero of legend is supposed to sound like, I'm quite disillusioned. Whatever, you made him out to be kind of a douche, in a way that's a little funny and original. BUT WTF WITH THE NOSES? They're like a giant, mutant, cancerous ear on one side of the face. And only some people have them. What about the soldiers wearing helmets? If the helmets had an extension on the side, like a metal nose-guard, that would mesh with everyone else and be a little funny. It seems however, that soldiers with head protection are required to chop off their noses. I'm not being overly critical, just saying what most people are thinking. These are my thoughts, take them or leave them; either way, thanks for the flash.