pretty good
Despite the fact that it was really short and simplified, i thought it was done well. Some of the 3d and surreal elements were a bit too pixelated and blurred to consider it artistic quality, but it still worked for the story. and i understand the title,
he/she(thought it was a he, actually) tries to escape the world by drawing a better world. i don't know what's confusing about that. were the other reviewers expecting some Houdini trick or something?
ill look forward to your other works. keep at it