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My first flash! Please don't flame or anything! Please tell me if it's good, or if I need to work on it. To be honest, this was a school project. It was one of the best in the class, and I hope you think so, too. Enjoy.
Characters are owned by ME!
Voices:
Swift: Tillerian
Muscle: Tillerian
Elasticat: Tillerain
Vixie: A classmate named Tanya (Thank you, Tanya)
for a first flash, this is great!
if this wasnt your first flash id give it a 1 maybe 2 tops /5 but seeing as it is your first flash your probably not as good as the guys that hit top 50 all the time soo yea great job man! 4/5 for you and hope you continue with your work!
hint: try shading like using a darker colour on edges. it makes it not look like it was done in paint.
Shading: In the process! Making my characters look better as I type! I know what you mean about the pain thing. I will get better! Promise! And the backgrounds will be better, too!
S'not bad,
Of course theres the obvious stuff of poor animation, but its probably better then I could have done. The voice acting was actualy quite good, but the mic seemed to have some backround sound, no fault your own. I found the story entertaining at times too, keep up the good work, and please don't listen to anyone that says bad crap about this. Its a great flash for your first time.
Thanks! I just got the program and will STRIVE to do better! I promise more and better!