Ok, not bad
Animation wasnt the best I have ever seen but not bad. It was a good flash that kept me interested. But I did laugh like hell when you showed him "loading" his gun.
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please rate and review, this is my first submission to the portal.
not as bad as some of the things on this site
I'm only giving you a 3 because there's that much room for you to improve. For your first flash it was a good effort, and I hope your next one is better. Not a bad concept for a short film, but the stick figures didn't lend themselves well to the shock value. The repeated sound bytes got really annoying, but that laught felt appropriate. Work hard, and you might produce some great movies.
that was odd
like the part where he gets shot.
O_O
Disturbing, but just the way I like it :P