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This is my first submission to Newgrounds (or anywhere for that matter). It's the first two movies that I made with flash. Please leave a comment with any help/suggestions/praise :P Also, I hope that it's not glitchy or anything. Apparently Newgrounds didn't like my original resolution, so I had to shrink it piece by piece. Yes, of course you know an easier way, but where were you at 2 a.m. this morning? Anyway, please be nice. Everything is ©Nintendo of course.

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Hmm..

Even funny, but I can't understand the second scene... can you tell me what's this about? ^^'

Kurishuna responds:

There's nothing to it. I made it while I was reading tutorials, so it was just me playing around and experiencing flash for the first time.

Eh... good work for a beginner?

Well, I wouldn't know how to do it myself, so I can't blast you for understandably submitting your first flash with little/no experience. But if you want a balanced truth, it wasn't the least bit fun to watch. I really don't know what to tell you because it looked like the flash version of what coders would call 'PRINT: "Hello World!', "

...but don't let that discourage you. I mean, the animation was fluid, it wasn't glitchy, the sound was well timed.

Kurishuna responds:

I know you're right, I was just so proud about having learned to use flash that I just wanted to upload something.... even in it was trash. I kept telling myself: "There's far worse crap submitted anyway." Thanks for the review!

I liked what there was, but to be honest....

You need to put more in before re-submitting, I'd say 5 scenes at least, then you'll have something good.

Kurishuna responds:

I know. Submitting this was basically me saying: "Hey people, look! I can use flash!"

WOW

WOW.... just WOW
8/10 =P

Kurishuna responds:

THANKS... just THANKS

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Votes
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Score
3.30 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 12, 2010
7:45 AM EST