I pulled my finger...

And this cartoon came out. You need to try harder man. If this is a first time submission, well it's not shabby. But just because you animated something doesn't mean it needs to be put on NG, especially something with a poor idea/story.

... indeed

what could i pick at ...one there is no sound; couold even drawn me in. two no loading screen; nice i hate those things but thanks to the first one i had no idea it start and misse half of it. third animation is a little ... mwe. forth i dont really understand whats going on. some guy wakes up and some midget comes bye, calling himself "his" nightmare, come and kills him. fith whats with the main guy? man of no thumbs needs help. well i'll stop here and give you the best i can muster. 2
overall: needs work and sound BUT once you clean it up im sure youll get 3 times higher easly.

needs

needs sound and voices also it needs to be longer

this is pretty bad

you need to add sound, draw better, better frame by frame stuff, learn actionscript, etc.
go watch and MEMORIZE the newgrounds tutorial page

It's ok...

For your first animation.