Good job, but like it's been said...

You need some sound. Like... for reals. Movies nowadays are like 60% film, 40% sound. Go pick up some music from the Audio Portal, there's a reason it's there. There are tons of good Video-Game typed songs there. And go get yourself some voice actors if you don't want to/can't do it yourself! There are TONS in the audio portal as well. You might wanna invest in some Sound Effects, too. I have a fuckton if you want to dip into my pool of shit (Okay, that sounded REALLY bad, but it had good intentions :D)

I really am not one to judge flash as all my skills are currently in Music. But from what I've seen, this really has potential. Just get some audio in there!

2 cents

great job. the lack of sound made it feel kind of slow. since its video game city. how about put some of the music in the video games you talk about in this flash.

Got potential

But I want to atleast put more work into it. And for christ sake dd some sound. Silence flashes are one of the most boring thing on newgrounds.

i liked it

animation was basic and no audio, however i thought it was still pretty decent to watch, next time audio would be good