good
this particular flash probably wont get a high score but i really see potential , if you do make another flash use characters like that guy at the end , he was well made and i can see you making a funny series in the future ,
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Author Comments
This is a promo for the company I work for, but it is my very first flash creation. I would really like some good criticism because it was a lot of fun creating and I would love to continue learning and working in Flash. Thanks in advance!
wattsaudio responds:
Thanks! the main reason I posted it on here wasn't necessarily for a high score, but more so to get useful comments like the one you provided. Since I'm new to this game, I want to get the help of people who know alot more about it than me haha
Bored!!!
Booooooriiing
Your advert would have hooked me, but...
This movie is completely ironic in the fact that it basically contradicts itself. I'm not saying it's a bad advertisement, but seriously, think about it this way:
You've made an advertisement about a sound company.
It features ONLY a small clip of monologue at the end.
What does that tell your viewers?
And I'm not trying to be critical or anything, but most of this you could actually create in PowerPoint. You did present the company in an interesting way, you just need to add more of a hook to it. Next time, offer a taste of what your company has to offer, they won't suffer for it.
wattsaudio responds:
I really appreciate your thoughts. The reason I didn't add any other audio to it is because the website it is a part of already has music clips playing in the back ground. this particular flash was just an idea I had to spruce up what use to be just a big block of text.