Odd but i liked it

~~REVIEW~~
First off great job on putting up some awsome and differant {VIEW-SHOTS} and second you put together some awsome {MUSIC} that seemed to flow well with the slow but fitting {ANIMATION} this was really neat from start to finish with the flow of it but mostly the {STORY} it was actually nice with the silent but some {VOICES} might have gave it an even more strange feel, which was a good thing, now i have to disagree with the {CREDITS} music it seemed to not fit with the whole setting, but still a great little flash here, infact i almost added it to my faves list, if it were not for that ending credit music, but other then that it was a very pleasent flash and story, as to improve on this well the music at the end i would remove, but more ideas and tips on how to improve on this more below, anyways good luck on any new work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The ending credit music should be something more soft as the films music was, seems more fitting that way, another idea might be adding some soft voices to add to the odd and strange effect of your idea.

~~OVERALL~~
An odd yet good flash i liked it very much.

~X~

Cakes?

I thought this was a very original flash if not the most suspenseful. I guess it just gives off such an interesting tone of mystery, it is hard to come up with a consistent theme. I would like to see this explained, but it's still a fine cartoon. The best part is the animation, as you really worked hard to put dimension into the stick figure medium. It seems like this guy was trapped at a mental asylum, which sort of happened to my brother next time. It was weird to hear that song played at the end.

Interesting

There's more behind this story. I'm curious to see the rest.
The moments where the characters did move showed a good presence of animation, the mysterious feel it all has does intrigue, and seems to hide quite the story.
It was a bit choppy, though. And I don't mean the shaky animation. I'm well aware that that's a style, but as finderr pointed out, there's too many darkened screens going 'later', etc. It minces the experience quite some. I'm not saying you shouldn't use them at all, but some moderation would be nice.

Last and certainly least, learn the difference between 'to' and 'too'. It's not that important, but when I see those types of mistakes it makes me cringe. That's just me, though. Perhaps I shouldn't have said anything about it.

I want to see what this world looks like. I eagerly await the second.
Cheers,
~Glun

Respect

goes to show it's in the story more than clean lines and fancy frame work

i liked it

but u had waay to many, "the next day" "that night" n stuff, less of that more longer scenes, :p