good flash

hey dude its me again :P

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About the flash
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its not bad made but there are a lot of things that need improvment. for example, the way the penguin move doesnt look natural and the sprite itself is just 1 frame. there are alot of tutorials on youtube or other sites that shows how to do such things so try to look at those

the music is to loud and VERY annoying. i had to turn of the music to watch the whole flash. there is a program thats called AudioCity. you can download it free and it lets you modify and any kind of music file.
also try to put some more music in the flash. in the first few minuts you dont here anything.

and the last piece of advise. TAKE MORE TIME TO MAKE IT. it becomes a lot better when you take the time for it.

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Rating
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Flash: 7/10
Music 6/10
Penguin 8/10 XD

Total: 7/10 (and a +1 friend bonus :P) 8/10

Cute

It's pretty cute. Not bad, but it's desperate for a grammatical editing and also a spell check. For example, there is no such word as 'civillions'. At least, not in English. But maybe it's Penguin? And I think, at another point, you meant, 'conspiracy'. There are more of these discrepancies.

In any case, it detracted slightly from the overall value of what you have. In reality, you've got a very good concept. It just needs more polish. And maybe some sounds. =/

I really like it

it has got grat potential, maybe some more music, some voice acting (it needs penguin noises) and maybe even some playable parts

This not bad

I believe if you work on it a lil n add more music n animation this series would be great other than wonderin how they die lol (seriously i wuold never kno who wins) its good keep it up n im sure U'll get 5s n 10s. ;D

Has Potential

more music and sound effects could be nice (there is some music but it was really demented and ear hurting), and the clicking gets really tedious. Otherwise it could have some damn good potential!