So here it is. The next animated comic I made after the success of "Alice in Zombieland" (Originally called "Rezzlo"). Oh, the summer of 2006. Made it in two days :) And, I tried to use some sound in the end. Turned out not very well, but it was my first try. So, judge me, hate me, love me :)
UPD: -2% of weigh!
Got some work to do still.
The animations were good.
The jokes were for the most part good.
Story: There were some breaks, like how did that one person become sick and die?
Audio: Umm why only at the end?
The biggest way you could improve is with better or well in some cases backgrounds period.
Really quite good.
Im giving you a 5/5 because I want this to go far, but you really need to add background music (You can even use tracks in the audio portal) and voice acting to make this more legit. Pretty good though.
What it needs
1. voice acting
2. more colors
3. more blood
Oh my gosh!
Great Job! the scale should be 20/10 for this flash!!! Very Funny! Hope you get awards for this! This is amazing. Once again,Great Job!