I imagined the black background was the canvas at the start, felt like the scenery was unnecesarily 'crammed' into the middle, though it is a good place for dialog later on. Easy to see the text. Music track kicks in at the right moment too, though some background noise would've been good even before that, and the transition to the next track was a bit sudden. Overall, impressive first submission! Keep it going.

-cd-

I love Metal Slug

That was a really good effort. Although it was all sprites and game generated content, still was cool to see it presented in a unique way. GREAT JOB!

Now for the critique, spelling errors will be your worst enemy. Please proofread your work before completion. Damn the Nickelback...thats not the reason why you got 8/10 by the way...I just don't like them. But I'll admit, they have gotten better.

One recommendation would be to try dynamic angles with the scene. That is the best way to take a 2-D game that everybody is familiar with and make it unique.

Ehhh...

Too short...

Its interesting...

The spriting is streamlined, but a little boring. I am interested in what these leads to and seeing this improve, but PLEASE watch your grammar, it makes it seem a little funny, but mostly annoying.