hmmm

your animation was abit choppy. A good way to fix this is to do more frame by
frame animating. I do like your use of colour and background. the animation was in time with the music I guess so you have accomplished that.

Lacking

I didn't really feel the timing. The parts where he jabbed the guy in the back sounded more like sound effects than parts of the song. I don't think this song was a very good choice for timing animation to; it didn't have much of a beat. It didn't sound good how the song kept breaking up when it got closer to the end. The drawings were pretty good, but the animation was pretty cheap.

I don't understand the story. I thought the dark skinned guy might've been a slave or something since he was being toyed with like that, but it seems like he was someone of importance and that the guard was just a retard.

Horribly animated

The animation was nearly non existent. You need to actually take time to animate stuff. People are not statues. The few animations that where there was badly done and felt off.

aaaaa not bad

just needs a story and beater physics