Not really proud of this one. Ill keep it to as a reminder of "How much you have improved"
Good start
I appreciated your work, because you are student 16 years old but already has a pieces. To be honest, I didn't anything in the same age. I always appreciate for younger who wants to learn in animation.
This work is not bad, I believe you can do more in the future :)
Yay?
Happy birthday! I have problems making sense too.
Didn't make sense...
Animation was....novice, like when the cake fell it didn't smash or anything, it just magically landed with a burning candle, there's no reason why the guy didn't like the candle...or why it blew it. There's just really no depth which you need for an animation of this quality.
The animation is novice becouse im a novice :D obviously.
But to compare with other beginner animations which are made by 12-13 year olds (yeah some of them are sometimes good) with crappy drawing and stuff im a Bit better.
summary of flash is as follows:
comedy: 1/10
animation: 3/10
effort: we will say 6/10
will this flash artist do better in the future?: I certainly hope so
I pass this flash almost entirely on the fact that effort went into it's production. If there were a good reason why it was made, and if the comedy and plotline were better, I would vote higher. The animation was good, the other factors that contribute to a good flash were lacking. When this flash author puts effort into all factors necessary to create a good flash, I will vote higher, potentially a 10/10.
Just as i expected a good reviewer always hits the bad sides of the animation and hopes for an improovment.
Youre absolutely right about the effort! And what else i can say i dont feel that ive put a lot of effort into a plot which made all these dumb scenes pointless. And the result is not as pleasing as i expected but oh well. we learn from our mistakes so the third one WILL Be BETTER
i will give you a chance
no i will not blam this
but i will vote a 2 just for the idea