I FEEL EFFORT

i feel as though the animation was a bit amateur, but i feel as though you put in some effort thus is why i've given you a passing score. one problem that i see with this is that the music is on a loop, even after the movie is done the music continues to play, and if you restart the movie the music is overlapped, and if you repeat this a few times the movie crashes. please end the music when the movies ends. mages are the best, that also helped your score.

Hmm...

To start, there were a few major things I'd like to point out about this flash.
The thing is that you shouldn't combine music in the preloader, it delays loading times SIGNIFICANTLY!
That is a major annoyance, and if you didn't do that then this flash would be no-where near 5 megs.
(a small loop is more acceptable if you must include music in the loading screen)

Other than that, the was fine and dandy, smooth flowing, but definitely not worth the 5megs.

Megs cost me money to dl, and the bigger the flash longer to dl.
Also, it costs more for NG to host.
Think about compression and removing unnecessary content.