Need some form of audio

I think if you wanted your animation to be one of those that you had to read to understand, you could have at least made the text/conversations appear more slowly, kinda like one of those silent movies.

Plus the submission desperately needed some audio. I am not specifically saying that I am giving you 4/10 for no voice acting. I mean even a bit of light-hearted background music from the Audio Portal could have sufficed.

Otherwise, at least the animation was smooth and the story was to a small degree interesting.

YOU'RE KIDDING

are you kidding? your first animation??? man, 1000X better than mine first animation. you got tallent dude. keep up like this and one day you may be the best animetor ever!!!

dude

this... is... the... best.... video.... EVER!!!1!!!1!!!1

Hmm

You show promise, but I suggest polishing your skills before uploading again...