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This was a school project... like all my other submissions. I want to submit it! Although i have no plans on improving the parts that are weird or suck. But! Feel free to tell me what you think!!! I will use it to improve new things I'm working on!


So Please Enjoy What I Have To Offer.


Also I'm pretty sure the sounds I use are from Flashkit.com, although I can't remember.

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Ha! Funny ending.

Alright, well, the first thing I notice that really could use some improvement on was the person's hand as he was reaching for the $100 bill. It kinda looked like a seagull's claw minus the talons. The walking animation could use some work as well, considering that he looked like he was sliding rather than walking. Unless this is your kind of art style, the head was disproportioned from the rest of the body making it huge and freakish. Lastly, the city scene needs more life! Add some pedestrians, magazine stands, hot dog carts, and homeless bums! Good luck next time when you create another flash!

Alright

Although you need to work on walking loops. Your character had a 'skating' appearance

Park bench was OK.

Everything looked horrible, the animations included... but that park bench was pretty nice.

its... ok...

The art is good. The sound effects are good. The plot is ok... but if you could just add a bit more charicter, explane why someone is assisting suisides with a 100$ on a string, that kind of thing. And make sure that the font dosent get all weird at the end. Then you should be well on your way to an ok submition there. Keep at it. Might I recomend a prodject with more depth?

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Uploaded
Sep 27, 2010
12:16 AM EDT