very bad
I did'nt understand the point of this thing on any level. The animation wasnt bad, but it was just an awful premice.
This is my character elvis that i designed for a series of shorts and i was thinking about what he should be like, so this is elvis.
p.s.
as this was a quickly i kept it at 12fps
very bad
I did'nt understand the point of this thing on any level. The animation wasnt bad, but it was just an awful premice.
Needs work
I could barely understand anything but the first few lines of the monologue. I don't know what to say about this other than fix the voice alteration so that you can hear what's being said.
Way more work
There was always a joke I made about an alien Elvis, so I thought this was actually going to have an alien Elvis. I guess it technically did, but not in the way I thought it would. I would have liked it a lot better if I could also understand what was being said. The color effects aren't too good and you really need to put in some shading effects. It also seemed to have very little going on except an alien talking. He did not seem to say anything particularly thought-provoking, so try to work on more detailed scripts.
Elvis? Perfect Dark?
I can't understand it at all, in most cases, it's best to keep any vocal effects at a minimum, especially in a flash like this where i don't think the animation is the main feature. And i don't know if you were referencing Perfect Dark or anything, but...yeah. Cut the vocal effects so we can actually understand it.
me confused?
not sure whats really happening maybe subs would help?