ok...

this really sucks though it is your first try. Sorry bro feel the truth

I wasn't entertained.

I wonder how people can vote as high as five on shit like this.
5 is for ok, this is not ok.

Ehh...

Not a bad first attempt. Could've done with some work but it's not completely horrible for a first flash. Just keep working on it and you could, someday, become a great flash maker, but for now, develop your flash making skills and keep practicing. Criticism aside, this is an interesting idea but I don't see too much Pivot unless it was you made this with Pivot first.

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at first i thought this wud b epic but now....just.....wtf man?

loads of room for improvement...

Not bad I guess. 2, because I do not know what is happening in the scene. And what about the glitchy trail they leave behind when they move? Sprites aren't fluid...At least u included a play, pause, and stop button, something I didn't do on my first, lol.