Hahah, I like it, it is funny!
But yeah, as stated by others you should increase the fps a little. Variation in perspectives is very important to get the viewers attention
Author Comments
Hello there!
Welcome to my first Newgrounds submission! Come on in, take off your coat, put your feet up!
This is the first time I have put my heart and soul into a flash animation, and I'm jolly well chuffed at how it turned out. It may be a bit rough, but my CS4 trial ended before I could properly go back and fine-tune everything, so hopefully you lovely viewers could take that into consideration when voting <3
HaruTheOtaku responds:
Thanks for the feedback!
I'm currently trying to get used to using 25fps, so hopefully my next animation will look a lot smoother :)
are you trying to say...
...that my bright green cardigan is nerdy? lol
It wasn't half bad.
I liked the music.
This is great for a first submission!
Keep it up, this actuality has some cool parts> I do recommend getting a little more creative with your "Camera angles" though :p
Great Work!
~Dj Sonik
Hmm...
Not too bad for a first, although the sun looked off, and where the guy's arms are swinging to run, you should've drawn some stripes instead of making it transparent and relying on the body stripes. Also, experiment with higher frame rates. 24 or 30 is good.