how come that gohst gave them powers but he rape me and my friend loll

Ahahaha

at first I wasn't TOO fond of your style of people, but it grows on you.
I'm just generally not fond of styles that have an absence of noses. xD

Anyways, This was really good. your storytelling skills are pretty good. (I don't think I've mentioned that before but your a good storyteller)

Through that whole part with the hobo I was laughing, so it was really entertaining, and thus this flash was a success.

Success man. You made me laugh. Good job. C:

Pretty Good

I liked the story to this flash, I thought it was pretty good, I do think that the ending could have had a bit more work done to it and the voice acting for Shaun could have done with some improvement, the rest was pretty good though. The way the sound has been edited to sound like it came from diffrent sides when the camera switched focus was also pretty good and not too harsh with headphones.

Music and other sound effects worked pretty well, I do feel more time was put into the background artwork than the character artwork but that doesn't matter too much, it was all still good and decent animation too. I'm glad you had subtitles too but I do think you could have had an option to turn these on and off, minor thing, but the voice acting was clear enough to hear what was said.

Overall, I enjoyed this flash and it was a pretty good story.

5/5

<3

like it

yes yes, magical powers, good ending :)

Not bad

I progress loading bar in the beginning would be nice. That way I know it's still working and not stuck.