Love the story and art; maybe do something about the solid white text being lost in the white background, though.
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Author Comments
A strange story about a bunny-like star that has a strange dream.
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This is a visual novel so, if you do not like reading, close this now, please. Elseways, this is a short story I wrote a long time ago and, following the success of my other visual novel 416, I decided to give it a try.
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Anyway, bla bla bla, I hope you like (and understand) it.
Thank you!
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Edit: I had forgotten to enable the loader in the game. It's now fixed, sorry for any inconveniences!
ToT
nice, very archetypal. But the grammar... eek. Are you a native speaker? you need a bit of help with English Composition, k? ;)
Nittram responds:
In my defense, I was 14 and I'm not a native speaker ahahaha, but thank you anyway :3
Why people say it's long ?
5mn is not long.
well, i also enjoyed the paradox concept. Still, i didn't fully understand the ending -that's why i gave it 4 instead of 5
So i would assume the cycle of Imashi waking up and releasing the Evil Imashi?
Nittram responds:
Yup n.n
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4.31 / 5.00
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