i think something just left here...
but i liked it, good job
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The theme for this round was "elephant in the room" i took the idiom for the idea.
Pete is a young guy from a poor neighbour, this night he enters a place where he is not well recieved.
Im not gonna talk about the meaning, just gonna say that the plates that you see are a metafore, theres a meaning behind it. Rhymes with equality, but its not just that. Enjoy.
EDIT: THINK ILL HAVE TO EXPLAIN THE ENDING PFF. AT THE END EVERYONE CALLS THE POLICE, THE POLICE TAKES HIM, NO QUESTIONS ASKED, JUST BECAUSE OF HATE.
GONNA FIX THE AUDIO AFTER THE JUDGES DECIDE EVERYTHING, IT WOULD BE DISHONEST TO DO BEFORE.
*i hate audio editing :(*
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man thats really sad
Deep stuff man.
I thought it was amazing.
francisyfl responds:
thanks :3 : D and im getting better and better, more stuff coming :3
If you had to explain the ending, why include it? Honestly I thought it was great and added a creative to use "Elephant in the room". If you ended before the "jail walk", I would give this five stars.
francisyfl responds:
aw u.u my mind is a weird place man :/ i do stuff, but im working on new stuff, im learning from my mistakes
