Ok, I'm really not sure what you had going here... First off, the graphics are pretty bad. Secondly, the controls are terrible. I spent probably 3 tries on the first level alone. Third off, fix the game over screen. It's horrid ear rape. Seriously. (All in all, fix the sound, the girl sounds like she's meowing)
All things considered though, this could be a good game. My suggestion would be to take it back down, polish it up a bit and re-sub it as a finely polished product. It just needs work.