Not too bad, could have been better. Was that the metal version of "Suprise Buttsex" at the end?
Author Comments
Every kid fears being touched, and Jorden touched me!
This is my first cartoon i made COMPLETELY on flash with no other programs and i think for a first try it is pretty good. I mostly did this cartoon to prove that i can make a good video that doesnt suck and has GOOD QUALITY!
Fallow us on facebook for updates: http://www.facebook.com/D3cartoons?ref=hl
D3lton responds:
ya i was.
this was great! i use the bamboo tablet aswell
D3lton responds:
I love wacom, they make the best art tablets
If this really is your 1st flash then i say 5/5
D3lton responds:
Thanks man, i love you!
And i will Jorden not to rape you as well
um ok the animation wasent that good it was ok i guse but im stll a noob so i wouldent know mutch about that but personally i woild give it a 2 or 3 but mainly a 2 also u need to work on your voice acting thank u for reading hope this helps u make the funnyest movie every lol sincerely Orochii7.
D3lton responds:
here is the thing, that was my voice being normal. I can voice act but this video didnt require that.
Good start. Drawings are good. However the theme could have been better...
D3lton responds:
If its a good start then why one star?