Okay to say the truth it wasn't that good but it's a good start and you can make better videos than that.
Well to start the voice acting wasn't that realistic to me.
The graphic and movement of the character wasn't good either i wont blame it's hard to make a video by yourself.
The story and the video was a bit short plus i didn't like the ending it's suppose to be funny but frankly it's not.
And also the seen of the bear , why did you even have to put it here and when he screamed my ears were blown off (wearing a head set).
As i said before it needs a bit of work and could been better and maybe a little bit longer (more story).