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A Hungry Astronaut

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Sometimes astronauts in space feel hungry as well. This astronaut certainly does. Suddenly he has an idea! Why not take a chocolate bar. But what happens when the chocolate bar slides off his hands?

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i didnt really like it at all

lol he should have ate before going into space lol.

rvhomweg responds:

You have got me there xD I guess the guy is just an idiot :) Brace yourself for people asking how come he is smart enough to go into space :p

Needs some work but i feel like there's a cool idea here. The growling stomach sounded more like he had to take a crap but it was a funny sound anyhow. More animation would be require and maybe just build on the idea a wee bit more. Its cool for a funny short, but it's a little too minimalist to be even that. I recommend taking what you have and improving it. Put more time into it. I understand animating can take a hell of a lot of time out of your day but if you put more care into the animation the better it will come out. You got a good thing here, you just didn't run with it quite as far as you should have. Keep trying at this, seriously because there's something good here. Don't waste this one man.

rvhomweg responds:

Thanks for your review, I appreciate your feedback. Like you say, animating is very time consuming. Only recently I have been able to work on my passion because I almost finished my studies. One of the things I struggle with, is the huge lack of inspiration, I feel my head is empty everytime I'm in front of my little samsung tablet. So I try to find a solution to put the very few ideas that fly by in my head, instantly into a piece of art. The quicker I work, the more my animations reflect how I feel and how I think at that very moment. Unfortunately 9 out of the 10 projects I start, end up in a little map on my desktop that I never open again. I will keep doing what I do untill I find the style that suits me the best, but now I keep searching for it :)

Art is nice but the animation needs work. All in all a decent animation.

Its so slow !!! come on !!

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Dec 30, 2013
9:51 AM EST