It was well animated and had coherent voice acting, but wasn't very funny, honestly. No punchlines and forced set-ups hurt this piece. Try taking more time to write next time
What does Ventus do on his free days? He comes up with jokes to tell his best buddie and fellow keyblade master, Aqua, but will he be able to make her laugh?
I actually created this awhile back, figured I'd upload it on here as well.
It was well animated and had coherent voice acting, but wasn't very funny, honestly. No punchlines and forced set-ups hurt this piece. Try taking more time to write next time