Some Compliments:
- Love the style of the hands moving objects on the scene.
- Great stage focus. (You don't have your viewers confused on what to look at on the screen - which is good)
- The exaggeration of the irony at the end was great.
- Did you do the voices by yourself? If you did you did a great job masking your own voice.
Some Criticism (Constructive):
- Your audio quality is weird. Go into flash's Publish Settings and change both "Audio Stream" and "Audio Event" to "Speech, 44kHz, Mono" (Be aware this takes up more space on your PC if you are cautious of that.)
- If you believe your backgrounds fit your style that's great. Personally I like more detailed backgrounds but hey! Maybe your viewers think differently - this is just my opinion.
- It's obvious that you are erasing the arms and redrawing them. If you could find a way to eliminate this problem it would be more visually appealing. (Such as redrawing the whole body instead of just the arm - to give more life as well)
Anyway, this kind of content is something I'd appreciate seeing on the portal! :)
Keep up the good work, Austin!
[3.5 stars]
- Breadgun
(I'm a fan of your work now lmao)