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It takes a long time to load
This is my first game. Don't hate.
sector 1 is now available.
Just so you know there are only 9 levels and no audio.
The graphics is ok. I like look of main character. And I really have nothing to say. You should do some actual levels. Tutorial shows only basic 2D platformer stuff, there is no original or interesting mechanics. Keep working on the game.
TheBlueDust responds:
I am going to add toggle able blocks which become solid and and also become passable.
It pains me to have to give this such a low rating, since you seem sincere in your desire to make a good game. Nevertheless, please do not make a habit of releasing games unfinished; this is a bad habit even for much larger game developers.
Like many unfinished games, I see the beginnings of a decent game here. Like I said, I think your heart is in the right place, so I'll give the best feedback that I can.
The main character looks like a robot of some sort - consider adding an introduction where you explain what it is and what its goal is. A little context goes a long way, especially with good storytelling.
Please lessen or eliminate the delay between finishing a level and going to the next one. This is a minor complaint, but the pause between levels is slightly annoying and completely unnecessary.
Most importantly, please do add more to the game. More levels, game mechanics, sounds, music, etc would improve it very much. I might know a guy who can help you with the music; message me if you're interested.
TheBlueDust responds:
Yes, I would like help with the music and I can shorten the time between levels. After I add timers I will start with the story.
Pro:
-Simple platformer , can be enjoyable
-A TUTORIAL (I know it may look dumb , but in a lot of platformer , there no tutorial for special stuff like ducking etc.)
Cons:
-Simple graphic
-No sound (You mentionned it in the desc.)
-Too short!
TheBlueDust responds:
I wanted to add one more mechanic to the game before I started with the storyline and that will be lasers. (Which I hope will be available soon.) I need help with sound so if you know of any soundboards please mention them. And thanks for the support.
Well... it looks like it can make good something good.
the art is pretty neat... a little too bland but I love pixel art so i just hope a little more background and design. Still it has potential. The movement animation is kinda slow mo moving xD idk if that was intentional but It's fine. Just noting it.
The gameplay is like many puzzle platformer so a good advice for ME is to be MORE UNIQUE since there are many like this game.
You can add a story, some description and settings also. Probably more game features like you said... lasers... cool. Add more stuff n_n be diverse and creative.
TheBlueDust responds:
I hope to make this more unique but I don't know how yet. Thanks for the Recommendations.